Druidtton's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Goodbye Flash]

Here's to you Adobe and Flash,
Rest forever here in our hearts.
The last and final moment is yours,
That agony is your triumph.

[I LIKE YOU]

Otherworldly sense of humor.

[DONKEY KONG | FRIDAY NIGHT GAMEZ | HISTORY OF NINTENDO'S FIRST ARCADE HIT]

Informative. I like it.
I don't think we've seen a long format docu-show on newgrounds since the Patchman: Spirit Science days.

Good luck to you and I'll stay tuned for more episodes.

JComX responds:

Thank you! I look forward to making more! I hope you like them!

[Who wants a tootsie pop?]

5 stars for all the wrong reasons

[spanish class]

It was rough, but also, it was smooth.

[study beats for #keepthebeat challenge]

I am a big fan of the lofi on pixels aesthetic and you did a good job.

[The Real Legend 5]

This is just one of those things that I forgot I needed.
A blast from the past, but looking better than ever.

Thank you for continuing to work on your project.

[Dot Dot Dot - Animated]

GOPER TUNA!
BRING MORE TUNA!
STATUE OF BIG DOG WITH FLEAS!
Some men like cheese...
Hot temperate cheese...
Green chalk that taste like hippies...
You caught to rocks?
Pet two cool rats...
You don't get cheese or chicken...

Play chess all day...
Hold his sock tips...

She sold me good, hot chicken...
Saucy hot peas...
Get me cod, please..
Rock talks to boy who believes...

Suck juice from moose
Fun, handsome goose,
Cement pizza? Noobie please!

Open bra top,
Get him locked up,
Leaky aquariataries.

Look there fruit loop!
Don't sue YouTube!
They wrote teh dictionary...!

SALSA COOKIES!
WINDMILL COOKIES!
THEY GAVE YOU GONORRHEA!

THIS OCTOPUS!
LETS GIVE HIM BOOTS!
SEND HIM TO NORTH KOREA!

OW, PAPER CUT!
SAND PAPER, AHH!
POTATO SOUP AND CHICKEN!

GO TASTE THE DIP!
IT'S MADE WITH COOL WHIP!
MAKE ROOM FOR aaaAAAaaa!
PIECE OF LOVELY Cake!

[Galactic Power Wizards]

Animation, 4
Comedy, 3
Length, 3
Voice acting, a cringe worthy 2
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Total average: 3 Stars

Anything that's worth doing, is worth doing right, and your length is not right at all.
Many new animators make the mistake of wanting to "put something out there" as quickly as possible, so they rush to finish their projects, and we get things like this very short animation.

I don't know how long it actually was(I didn't count) but it felt to be around 30 seconds.
Now, I'm not saying all animation NEED to be long to be good, but I'm saying that in your particular case, a lengthier animation was necessary.

There was no exposition, no plot, no resolution, no climax, and no punchline.
The only characters that seemed likable in this case, where the seals.
If you plan on making more of these, here's a couple goals you can work towards.

2-4 Minute animation. This will give you enough time to provide an actual story, and an actual climax/punchline.

Find, and colab with, another voice actor. I'm not saying the voice acting here was particularly bad, but both wizards sound the same, that's a big no-no. You could at-least try to use a difference voice register for each one.

Your animation is fluid, and your art style is... well... your own. Not particularly good, but also not bad. Keep practicing.

I won't criticize your comedy, because that's a matter of personal taste. However, seals slapping men is under no circumstance, 'a good punch line'.

TL;DR: Don't rush to upload an animation within a month of starting. A good animation can take more than 6 months to make! Don't publish something, until you are absolutely SURE that it is done.
Show it to your friends and family before you finish, and listen to their opinions, and make edits accordingly.

Anyway, hope to see more of you in the future.

[DBZ - Proctology Academy]

Is this in any way inspired by Dr. Goku's show(consultorio del Dr. Goku), by Raul Barrera? Or is there more than 1 person who would like Vegeta to be a proctologist.